Analysis of Submission



When one is to submit
Then he is in contact
Soul should refine pact
This fact remains infact

God showers His graces
For untrodden races
On only one basis
To sivert heart and faces

Human is so weak
That he can't speak
So he has to seek
Help to be on peak

Beauty needs love
Why, where and how
Like little dove
One has to bow

To cherish his soul
For objective and for goal
He has to play his role
By converting as a whole

Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Copyright 2014 Golden Glow


Scheme ABBA XCXC DDDD EFEF GGGG XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11101 11011 11011 110110 1110 110110 111010 10111 1111 11111 11111 1011 1101 1101 1111 11011 1010011 111111 1010101 1010101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 449
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Muhammad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhammad Khalid Khan lives in Abbottabad Pakistan.His pen name is Mehr which means Love and Sun in Urdu and Persian. He did his F.Sc and B.A from Government Post Graduate College Abbottabad afterwards he did his Masters in English Language and Literature, LLB, Masters in Educational Administration from University of the Punjab Lahore, he also did Masters in TEFL (Applied Linguistics) and Diploma in TEIL (Teaching English as an International Language)under the auspices of British Council and American Centre, he started his career as lawyer and then got commission in PAKISTAN ARMY as an English Instructor where he served for 27 years. He is a poet and writer. As an editor his appreciable work is Pakistan Army Journal, Pakistan Defence Review, Army Green Book and The Rising Crescent...,His Seven books are already published namely Pa be-Gill (Urdu Poetry), Anap Shanap (Urdu Humorous Poetry), Feelings (English Poetry), Gulab Rehnay Day (Urdu Poetry), Chains of Life (English Poetry), Raflian (Hindko Poetry) and Khaki Lafafa (Urdu Prose).His two latest books one in English Poetry Golden Glow and the other in Pushto Poetry Da Meenay Dastak have been published recently.His two books of Urdu Poetry Aks Dar Aks and Ant Shant are under publication.His email address is khalidk1558@gmail.com.His published books can be seen and read on his website,mehrpoetry.com as well as on his page on facebook. more…

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