Analysis of Tattered Heart



My heart beats
But it slows
The Rhythm fading

Once the eternal roar
Of life itself
Washed away

With Endless slumber
The heart creates
As it shatters

A touch restart
The Rhythm lost
By tattered pieces

But loves touch
Stolen from clutches
Of loves own blood


Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXA XAX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (60%)
Metre 111 111 01010 100101 1101 101 11010 0101 1110 0101 0101 11010 111 10110 1111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 241
Words 46
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 42
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted on June 15, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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