Analysis of Thanks for the novel Valery Alalykin
Thanks for the novel
Painfully I waited for you at the sea.
The evening breeze is breathed sadly from a land.
You have so and not come this time.
And I all am trusted in related souls.
All the summer long my soul groan was lasted.
Your image in the remember did not thaw.
I went on the coast, as on the platform,
And waited for you a day by day in the tearments.
But here "the deity" charm has disappeared.
In a soul the fire of a hopes hasty has ashed away.
Not to revive already the died words,
But not to forget the gentle touches .
What for the deceit was necessary to you?
The happiness fragile is rolled in the past by a wave.
And nevertheless thanks for the novel, -
It is pleasant to drink all grief up to the bottom.
9.04.2011
Спасибо за роман
Мучительно я ждал у моря Вас.
Вечерний бриз дышал печально с суши.
Вы так и не пришли на этот раз.
А я всё верил в родственные души.
Всё лето длился мой душевный стон.
Не таял образ Ваш в воспоминаньях.
Я шёл на берег, будто на перрон,
И ждал Вас каждый день в терзаньях.
Но вот исчезла прелесть "божества".
В душе угас костёр надежд поспешных.
Не воскресить уже умершие слова,
Но не забыть прикосновений нежных.
Зачем Вам нужен был обман?
Обломок счастья катит в прошлое волна.
И всё-таки спасибо за роман, -
Приятно всю печаль испить до дна.
9.04.2011
Scheme | abxxxxxxbxxxxxxaxC C |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11010 10011011101 01011110101 11101111 01111000101 10101111110 11000010111 111011101 010110111001 1101001101 001010101101101 1101010011 1110101010 11001110011 01001011001101 000111010 1110111111010 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,711 |
Words | 250 |
Sentences | 31 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 18, 1, 17 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 192 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 82 |
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Modified on March 05, 2023
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