Analysis of That Feeling
The music distorted and low in her ears
Throbs in her skull with each pound
Of the bass, but the pleasure of liquid
Gold chilling and warming her veins,
Is enough to ignore the empty self loathing.
Needles and pipes
Can't disguise loveless mourning
For the life that was lost when that
Needle first penetrated porcelain skin.
And the pills that she choked down
With liquor and discontent finally kick in.
Then the feeling begins.
Time drags and lags as she slumps in the corner.
Shimmering memories and crushed
Hopes of serenity fill and spill from her wandering
Forest greens marble eyes-
And she wonders if this life is worth that
Precious, overwhelming, disgracefully pleasurable
High that she craves, served with rust, a needle
And heartbreaking shame.
Consistent and anxious pins of fatigue
Take the pleasure away from the diamonds she sees
As she floats in the sky when the belt wraps her arm
Pulled tight to her hole-punctured flesh
In the hopes of ultimate satisfaction...
Or death, if it takes her first.
Scheme | XXXXA XABC XCX XXAX BDDX XXXXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01001001001 1001111 1011010110 11001001 101101010110 1001 1011010 10111111 1011001001 0011111 110000110010 101001 11011110010 10010001 11010010110100 101101 0110111111 1001011000 1111111010 0101 0100101101 101001101011 111001101101 11101101 0011100010 1111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 989 |
Words | 173 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 4, 3, 4, 4, 6 |
Lines Amount | 26 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 137 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
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Submitted on August 21, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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