Analysis of the Lions call to man




I saw a tear in the eye of the butterfly

Pain in the heart of the lions roar

I saw a tree in the forest crying

As birds walked across the floor

When the wolf howled at the moon

And nobody heard his call

His cry caught in the howling wind

And now a tear drop falls

Rain washed away the rainbows

Leaving crimson falls

Acid rain falls from the heavens

Scorching river banks and more

I feel the pain in the heart of the lion

and in the lions roar

I saw pain in the eye of the butterfly

As the Earth now start to crawl


Scheme A B X B X C X D X D X B X B A C
Poetic Form
Metre 11010011010 100110101 1101001010 1110101 1011101 01111 11100101 010111 110101 10101 10111010 1010101 11010011010 000101 1110011010 1011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 498
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted on August 24, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jane Lomas

All poems included here are just first draft's. I hadn't written poetry for a few years, so to polish my art and find my muse I posted some quickly written poems on these pages so I could see your response. It has helped me by reading your reviews about my poems (all of which I have taken into consideration) all comments have helped me improve my work a great deal. Thank you. I realy enjoy reading all your poems. I find some very insperational, some very heart felt, some very deep, which has helped me to push myself and dig deeper. Very deep, on some occasions. So my own poetry has vastly improved- since I have joined this sight, it has certainly helps splur me on. Thank You for all your imput and replies, please keep it up. It has helped educate me and make me a better writer. So if you would like to read more of my poems (the ones I've taken time over, polished them, played with them, worked on them till they truly worked)for your pleasure I have now with confidence published my own book. A MEASUREMENT OF THE MIND, POEMS OF LIFE AND LOVE. its available on ebook at Amazon. Thank You. more…

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