Analysis of The Maid's troubled Soul
-the simple maid, lost in the mire
-of her trying daily troubled soul
-the chores keeps on coming
-and the dry hand of the maid
-keeps working so restlessly
-like the rampaging tireless bee
-running up and down, sweating
-the maid have no better choice
-drinking her tears of lost hope
-as each day looks at her
-with pity and yet passes-by
-the maid's master cares less
-how the minutes of life
-was lost on the maid's head
-all that matters goes on ahead
-with the will of the master
-the maid, an ophan of broken world
-without members of same blood
-just like a stone thrown from
-the empty sky upon the earth
-the maid swallows her pains
-like bread just to keep life together
-the hope of her tomorrow wanes
-at every crow of a new dawn
-hunger in the mist of plenty
-takes the seat of her stomach
-hope for a better dream tomorrow
-lost to the gripping hands of suffering
-how long the pains and troubles
-of her innocent soul will last
-only the time and the timely arrival
-of the caring savoiur will tell!
By: Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi (C) June, 2014
Scheme | XXAXBBAXXCXXXDDCXXXXECEXBXXAXXXX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01011001 101010101 011110 0011101 1101100 10101001 1010110 0111101 1001111 111110 11001101 011011 101011 111011 11101101 1011010 01111101 0110111 110111 01010101 011001 111111010 0110011 110011011 10001110 1011010 11010101 1101011100 1101010 10100111 10010010010 1010111 11111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,020 |
Words | 195 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 32, 1 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 407 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 98 |
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Submitted on March 17, 2015
Modified on March 05, 2023
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