Analysis of the man who left me at the hotel room after he did his business
You came into my life and took what you were coming for
As weak and frail as I was you didn't hesitate
You walked all over me and did your ugly, dirty business
You shedder me and you crippled me
You demolished my whole future in front of me
now I'm here feeling empty and barren because you knew I was feeling less about myself and you knew how to eat those kind of girls for breakfast.
I know
a girl like me shouldn't have to swim in her tears every night as she goes to sleep to rest her thoughts
a girl like me deserves to be happy like it's her wedding day
i should be rejoicing life and its contribution ,but instead I'm left writing about you and your destruction
You left a mark on me
I can't trust again because of you
I lost myself because of you
You are now the cause and you are the disease that ate my inside and left me with nothing but an empty stomach
you destroyed what i had in store for myself
i was beginning to gain my self-esteem back even
confidence was oozing out of my body like a torn water hose
i was loving life
little did i know that you were getting lonely and you were looking for your next victim so the wind led you to me
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Metre | 11011101110101 110111111010 111101011101010 11101101 101011100111 11110100100111111010110111111111110 11 0111101110011001111111101 0111011110110101 111010101010101111001101010 110111 111010111 1110111 1110101100111101011110111010 1011110111 11010111101110 10011011110101101 11101 10111110101001010111101011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,147 |
Words | 232 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 14, 5 |
Lines Amount | 19 |
Letters per line (avg) | 48 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 456 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 118 |
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Submitted on September 30, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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