Analysis of The Mental Traveller




Part 1: The Argument

Blown far from his course,
long sailed he on the ship of fools,
where youth is lost in the ravening deep,
until one day,
with face turned into the fickle wind
he leaped from the deck-
headlong into strange waters

Part 2: The Fairy

Swept against shores of desert,
he wandered many a long day
in search of a new life,
but found there none -
visions came of his fellows from the ship of fools
reminding him of its comfort
and how swiftly the days pass by,
as in the land of the lotus eaters,
but to these dreams he did not succumb.

On he wandered
and preserved his water
through the reaches of this wasteland
until those seductive visions passed,
and dreams of a more frightening nature came,

riding on brooms,
riding on the beams of the waxing moon,
promising pain and whispering sad falsehoods
that his heart was no thing of stone
but must admit the strangling fingers of despair
whose prey is heroes and lovers.

But neither to these morphic phantoms did he fall
until at one month's end,
when the moon had hidden her face in the shadow of her husband - Earth, and all false spirits were blinded thus,
another dream- a vision on happier wings than those before
floated to his battered soul,
made its silent course across the distant mountains and valleys
and to that frontier where he lay,
alone in the deepening shadows of the dying embers of a little fire.

There on silent wings the welcome vision took form
before his waking imagination's subtle eye,
and the vision was of a fairy-
a mountain spirit, who whispered

"Why do you lie here sleeping Mental Traveller,
awake, arise and behold
there is a world which is neither lascivious, nor barren,
were one can find peace,
free and unchained from soul destroying oblivion.
But tell me O man...
To what land do you aspire?"

'To paradise' he murmured through lips entranced

"No less!" replied the spirit - "and what would you find there?"

'Respite' he moaned.

"And with whom would you keep company?"

'with Angels Bright' said the Knight with a heart so full of hope
that he woke himself ere his last utterance had vanished

And these last fairy words crept through the vales of sleep
before his inner ears closed-

"Paradise is within but come with me and you shall see angels."


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Poetic Form
Metre 10100 11111 11110111 11110011 0111 111010101 11101 101110 1010 1011110 11010011 011011 1111 101111010111 01011110 01100111 1001101010 111111101 1110 001110 1010111 011010101 01101100101 1011 1010110101 1001010011 11111111 1101010010101 11110010 11011110111 011111 1011100100110101011100101 0101010110011101 1011101 111010101010010 01101111 01001001101010101010 111010101011 011101101 001011010 01010110 111111010100 0101001 110111100100110 01111 101110100100 11111 1111101 1101101101 1101010011111 1011 011111100 11011011011111 11101111100110 011101110111 0111011 101011111011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,188
Words 411
Sentences 12
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 1, 9, 5, 6, 8, 4, 7, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on July 24, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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