Analysis of THE OLD TELEPHONE (Poem #151)



The telephone is a wonderful invention,
 Calling all kinds of things to your attention.

Keeping in touch with family and friends,
 There's all sorts of information it sends.

You must come to work, we need more help.
A neighbor saying your dog has started to yelp.

Living in the country and having a party line
 Meant others could listen to you at the same time.

When the phone rang, we had to carefully listen
 To which ring was ours or a call we'd be missing.

Our ring was 3 short, but there were 3 others
 Who may listen in if it were not for their mothers.

We'd all give a jolt at the very first sound
 When off to the telephone we surely were bound.

Standing there waiting for those 3 short rings
 For a call just for us as the telephone sings.

© Copyright 1998 by Jean E. Gorney


Scheme AA BB CC XX AX DD EE FF X
Poetic Form
Metre 01010100010 10111111010 1001110001 111101011 111111111 010101111011 1000100100101 110110111011 101111110010 1111101011110 1011111010 1110011011110 11101101011 11101011001 101101111 10111110101 1011110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 775
Words 150
Sentences 11
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on August 14, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jean Gorney

I wrote a poem for my daughter and new son-in-law and read it at their wedding reception in 1997. People have been encouraging me ever since. I try to write up-beat and happy poetry. My poetry has been in many anthologies, newspapers, church bulletins,etc. I won a small contest once. I self-published some small(4x5)books with about 16 poems in each that can be used as greeting cards. I include an envelope for mailing. Check them out on my FB page under Jean Magill Gorney. more…

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