Analysis of THE TRAFFIC (Poem #135)



Cars, trucks, busses, trailers and such
 all heading down the highway.
 Why does so much traffic always have
 to be going my way?

Highways, bridges, tunnels and turnoffs
which way should I go?
Sometimes I'm lost, getting exhausted
 or the traffic just goes so slow.

Tuning and twisting, a better route
 I'm always looking to find.
But maybe an airplane is the only
 way to keep from being behind.

(c) Copyright by Jean E. Gorney


Scheme XAXA XBXB XCDC D
Poetic Form
Metre 11101001 110101 11111011 111011 1101001 11111 011110010 10101111 100100101 111011 110111010 11111001 11011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 417
Words 75
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on August 11, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jean Gorney

I wrote a poem for my daughter and new son-in-law and read it at their wedding reception in 1997. People have been encouraging me ever since. I try to write up-beat and happy poetry. My poetry has been in many anthologies, newspapers, church bulletins,etc. I won a small contest once. I self-published some small(4x5)books with about 16 poems in each that can be used as greeting cards. I include an envelope for mailing. Check them out on my FB page under Jean Magill Gorney. more…

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