Analysis of The Universal Language Of Love



The green leaves of March, gave way to the red sands of June
As our love blossomed, under the pull, of the midnight moon
The waters of our life, merged together, in a waterfall of emotion
As the rainbow of our love spills over, to the passions of devotion
The pail blue sky offered peace and tranquility with white clouds in motion
Yet the night sky offered depth, imagination and trust in its following
As the stars fuse together love and understanding, that's eternally calling
The wild winds blow, as the sands of time drift through emotional warnings
Impossibility is tranquility forever, without any storm or volcanic explosions
Destruction is the price of all pain, may it be the heart or some other emotion
Yet to rise from the ashes to begin again, is born out of natures plan for creation
From death there is birth be it the stars, sun, moon or mankind's imagination
Within the mind, all of creation can be born within the hearts of stagnation
Allowing the heart to heal and giving it over to love completely and uncontrollably
Is to trust in the universal plan of peace harmony and total tranquility


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Poetic Form
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Characters 1,095
Words 196
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 897
Words per stanza (avg) 196
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Submitted on October 09, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jane Lomas

All poems included here are just first draft's. I hadn't written poetry for a few years, so to polish my art and find my muse I posted some quickly written poems on these pages so I could see your response. It has helped me by reading your reviews about my poems (all of which I have taken into consideration) all comments have helped me improve my work a great deal. Thank you. I realy enjoy reading all your poems. I find some very insperational, some very heart felt, some very deep, which has helped me to push myself and dig deeper. Very deep, on some occasions. So my own poetry has vastly improved- since I have joined this sight, it has certainly helps splur me on. Thank You for all your imput and replies, please keep it up. It has helped educate me and make me a better writer. So if you would like to read more of my poems (the ones I've taken time over, polished them, played with them, worked on them till they truly worked)for your pleasure I have now with confidence published my own book. A MEASUREMENT OF THE MIND, POEMS OF LIFE AND LOVE. its available on ebook at Amazon. Thank You. more…

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