Analysis of This Water



This water rushes over me;
it submerges my soul.
So cold and unforgiving;
it freezes me to the bone.

This water rushes over me;
it suffocates my life.
So heavy and stifling;
it cuts my air like a knife.

This water rushes over me;
it buries me from above.
So wet and unrelenting;
I'm drowning in your love.


Scheme Axbx Acbc Adbd
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 11010101 1111 1100010 1101101 11010101 1111 110010 1111101 11010101 1101101 110010 110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 294
Words 58
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on February 02, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Gabriel McBride

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