Analysis of Till the end



Seeing you shed those eyes
Seeing you blowing airs on my head
Those dancing hairs I have fallen for
Those shyness in your face
Those impishness nature in you
I will never forget those
Till the end

Leaving off my hands
Running away from me
Watching you boarding the train
I will never stop hating you
Till the end

Like those lovebirds on roadside
Like those bees fallling for those nector
I will never forget you in my life
Till the end

Closing my eyes in your shelter
Being touched by your heart
I will have imbibed within me
An everlasting crave for your love


Scheme xxaxbxC xdxbC xaxC xxdx
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Tetractys  (30%)
Metre 101111 101101111 110111101 110011 111001 1110011 101 10111 100111 1011001 11101101 101 11111 1111111 1110011011 101 10110110 101111 11101011 10101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 541
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on April 17, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ravi Kant

Hello friends, I am from India. Coming to my educational details, I am an electrical engineer and currently I am in the final phases of my doctoral program. In due course of time I have imbibed some flavors of poetic thoughts, which eventually came out unconditionally, all of a sudden. I was afraid at the beginning that I won't make a good poem so I was reluctant to do so. On the other hand I started with a short story that I was little confident about. But, after 6 short stories were published I got tired. Somehow poetry was in the veins and therefore I started with one. Poetry.com came to my help, I enjoyed getting encouraging review and also tasted bitterness. But in the end, I loved sharing my poems here and enjoyed reading others as well. Now, I am perplexed on how my fear turned out to be my love. I wished to be in the top 12 ranks at least for once, so I tried. I didn't thought I could make it 1st but somehow I could manage it on 30 and 31th Oct. In course of my journey to the top list I have gone through many poems and enjoyed many of them. What I realized at the end is those poems weren't just poems. They talked about various peoples, their livelihood, their humorous wits, their sorrows, pains, love for the other, they also talked about moral and what our almighty god says. I cherished my happiness in these poems and sadness at times. I am also happy that I am a part of this community.Thanks to the Poet's community. Anyone interested to keep in touch with me, please welcome. You can send me request at these links also you will find my email here.Weblinks,1) http://arkmaniacs.wordpress.com, 2) http://www.linkedin.com/pub/ravi-kant-a/25/a6/1b3, 3) https://www.facebook.com/ravi.kant.7140, 4) https://twitter.com/ARaviKant1, 5) http://poetry.com/users/199123-Ravi Kant, 6) http://yourstoryclub.com/author/ravikant-writer more…

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