Analysis of Transient Eternity

Ron VanHooser 1956 (Franklin County, MO)



Spinning, wheeling, turning,
a streak of light across the universe.
My soul, my spirit, all that I am,
gone in a brief flash
here in this place, this earth,
but everlasting in the cosmos.

Searching, reaching, touching,
my soul, my spirit,
all that I am, winds itself,
binds itself around your soul,
your spirit, all that you are,
a steady beacon, an endless column of light.

I am a sparkling ice crystal
reflecting the beauty of your comet self,
the tinkling sound of glass
shattering in the cold,
a lower note, not lesser,
harmony to your rich symphony.

From galaxy to galaxy we whirl and turn
leaving in our wake a melody of light,
of love immortal to those who scan the skies;
eternal in its perpetual newness,
yet all too brief for us,
forever is not enough time to love you.


Scheme AXXXXX AXBXXC XBXXXX XCXDDX
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 011101010 111101111 10011 101111 10100010 101010 11110 1111101 1010111 1101111 010101101011 11010110 01001011101 0100111 100001 0101110 100111100 110011001101 100101010011 11010111101 01001010010 111111 01011011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 756
Words 142
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted by RonGV on May 01, 2011

Modified by RonGV on May 08, 2021

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Ron VanHooser

Ron VanHooser is from the Ozarks of southern Missouri. His poetry is the voice of a heart and soul filled with love, passion and a deep appreciation of the beauty of the world and those he shares it with. He currently resides in the wine country of southwestern Oregon. more…

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