Analysis of unconcerned



Take a step outside
The boundaries we live in
get to know yourself
The real you, the real me
Join the hands of faith
That hold you, that know you
Let the love go free
That's in us, that's in me...

Love lives in me,
Loves free to be
Pain grows to burn,
Lessons concerned
Unconcerned...

Open the eyes of all
Who see you, who see me
Never lose sight of all
You stand for, you live for
Let go of the pain
That holds you, that binds you
Break free of it all
Around you, around me...

Love lives in me,
Loves free to be
Pain grows to burn,
Lessons concerned
Unconcerned...

Dreams in you
Flow in me
When you come again
The time
Stands still
Inside
You feel me, I feel you...

Love lives in me,
Loves free to be
Pain grows to burn,
Lessons concerned
Unconcerned...


Scheme axxbxcbb BBDEE fbfxxcfb BBDEE cbxxxac BBDEE
Poetic Form Song
Metre 10111 0100110 11101 011011 10111 111111 10111 101101 1101 1111 1111 1001 01 100111 111111 101111 111111 11101 111111 11111 011011 1101 1111 1111 1001 01 101 101 11101 01 11 01 111111 1101 1111 1111 1001 01
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 717
Words 149
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 5, 8, 5, 7, 5
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on March 14, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Justin Miller

I've went through so much and still am. I miss my daughter Zoey so much. Her mother thinks its best for us to not see one another for some reason. So a lot of my poetry is based on her. Missing her, and how much pain I'm going through without her. I have a good girl friend and she has been going through all of this with me. Shes a blessing to me. I love you Jenny Lynn. more…

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