Analysis of Up on a Hill



We a pair like Corona and Lime
Like Swaychze, let's get together

And just relax
Let the pain go past us
Cause we're past that

Let the wind flow through your beautiful hair
And let us both be unaware for a second
of a danger and just live life

Get rid of the strife
Stick with me, and we'll both be free
From the insanity of this
And we'll always be home,
together or alone

Cause we'll always have each other
along with friends like family
The ones that stick to see
and make sure we become who we set out to be,

but let's not worry about all that now
Let's just chill till the moon goes up and down

There's no pressure, just
a breeze, a hill, and our love's will
that'll bring us up and let us see
this memory

every time we need a smile
cause once in a while
we'll be alone

but we won't be alone
cause we got each other
closer than sister and brother
tighter love than a child and mother

They say in marriage,
"Til death do us part"
But if this love is true
it'll remain in our souls' hearts


Scheme XA XXX XXB BCXXD ACCC XX XXCC EED DAAA XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101101001 1111010 0101 101111 1111 1011111001 01111011010 10100111 11101 11101111 10010011 01111 010101 1111110 01111100 011111 011101111111 1111001111 1111011101 11101 010101011 101110111 1100 10011101 11001 1101 111101 111110 10110010 101101010 11010 11111 111111 100101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 958
Words 200
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 5, 4, 2, 4, 3, 4, 4
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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