Analysis of Walking In The Snow



These pale flecks of frosted emotion sting

my skin (bare) when I walk

A seething so sudden, that

at first, it is unnoticeable: purely snow.

Then Cold turns to cinders - turns to

Ash; scoring, cutting, infecting

my Body with your Curse

I blame the snow, but I should blame

The numbness in my fingers

stings from your cold spite -

Yet I continue, persisting on our voyage across this icy road:

My heart, once again replenished with flaming desires - childish yet

visible; today, after your bitter touch

Falls to the ground... Cracking,

Splintering with an essence of you

The warm face of the sun, distant and rare

Shines no more -

Not in winter, at least, whilst

Walking in the snow
.

Copyright © JRFB 2012


Scheme A X X B C A X X X X X X X A C X X X B X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111100101 111111 0101101 11111101 11111011 11010010 110111 11011111 0100110 11111 1101001011010011101 11101010110010101 10001101101 110110 100111011 0111011001 111 1010111 10001 1 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 742
Words 132
Sentences 11
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on May 06, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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