Analysis of Wheel of Excellence



For them ,their God of luck is always as close
As their tasty hard earned cup of  tea

For whom the real joy comes with constant action
Ringing ,enjoying ,listening all the bells in all sessions

Broad  learned mind open your brain parachute
Big ship sail in rough ocean does not harbor

Stay alive tired boxer to bear one more bout
Enjoy peacefully the labor pain smiling mother stout

Road of success  always whisper  try once more
Your inner precious gem polished with consecutive frictions
Enjoy the sight of beach but do not get addiction
O Traveller ! Feed your mind with nutritious thought
Never loose any victory,better die in all the war fought

Who do not betray to the song of his mind
Their wheel of excellence best wheat grind

For them their God of luck is always as close
As their tasty hard earned cup of tea

~~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~~


Scheme Ab cd xx ee xdcff gg Ab x
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 111011111 11011111010 100101001010110 111101110 11101101110 101101011111 01100010110101 1101110111 110101101010010 0101111111010 110011110101 101101101011 11101101111 111100111 1111111111 111011111 110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 827
Words 152
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 5, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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