Analysis of When We Were Young



When we were young, the minutes were long
Then days go by and now years are gone
When we were young, time was our friend
Now time marches on, and everything ends
When we were young, we lived for the day
But everything breaks when we look away

Now that we're older, a year is a moment
And all that we are, and still we can't hold it
Now that we're older, we still can be taught
Our time's running out, but time's all we got
Now that we're older, we still live for the day
But new turns to old, and white fades to grey

You are older now than you have ever been.
Believe when I say...
You will never be this young again.


Scheme XXXXAA XXXXAA XAX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 110101001 111101111 110111101 111010101 110111101 110111101 11110011010 01111011111 1111011111 10110111111 11110111101 1111101111 11101111101 01111 111011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 603
Words 126
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 24, 2023

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Rick McDonald

DoB:May 28,1976 Hometown:Springfield,Missouri Sex:Not Often Email:r1ckjam3s@hotmail.com more…

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