Analysis of Your Hands



What were we talking of that night?
Hypothermia – your cold hands.
My body burns in your light.

Your eyes upon me want to bite
And I freeze into silence
What were we talking of that night?

If I could, I would take flight
But I cannot face the cold:
My body burns in your light

If only I could stand and fight
But you enfeeble me with words
What were we talking of that night?

We are locked in this eternal rite
Though only agony is ours,
My body burns in your light.


Scheme AxA axA axA axA axA
Poetic Form
Metre 10110111 0100111 1101011 11011111 0110110 10110111 1111111 1110101 1101011 11011101 11010111 10110111 111010101 110100110 1101011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 454
Words 94
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Julia McKeown

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