Analysis of Your touch makes me like you



YOUR TOUCH MAKES ME LIKE YOU
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 My head is resting on your flower
 Your hands do me velvet shower,
 Your heartbeat is melodious lullaby.
 Your warm lap raise my clouds tower

Your presence fill my empty space
 No need,no want no desire remains
 Nothing absent with your grace
 Your smile enrich me all the gains

Your touch makes me like your hue
 True sun shine reflects in morning dew
 Both of us are mingled to become one
 In your body blanket,I am not I but You.

My head is resting on your flower
 You make me what I am not but you
 Your hands do me velvet shower
 In your body blanket my soul becomes you

~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~~


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Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1 111101110 11111010 111010010 11111110 11011101 111101001 1010111 11011101 1111111 111010101 1111101011 0110111111 111101110 111111111 11111010 01101011011 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 647
Words 123
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on August 23, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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