Analysis of Zombie Love



My love for you is beyond my saying
Your darkest hour, is a pond where I'm playing.
No strings attached, but still you're slaying
Blood around your neck, teeth marks the spot.
I am not a vamp, need a brain to plot!
You drain my energy, when you fight it off
When consumes you, such fur, such soft.
I keep you wrapped around like a necklace
Keeping your mind my spotless
From the rotten things that endanger souls
Slicing threw, with swords of gold.
I walk so dead, deadly and still
Ahead of me an army at my will.
You lived taked it at your own risk
Now your floppy like me, an outdated disk.


Scheme AAABBCDEEFGHHII
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111101110 110101011110 110111110 101111101 1110110111 11110011111 10111111 1111011010 1011110 1010110101 1011111 11111001 0111110111 11111111 1110111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 578
Words 115
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 459
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Submitted on August 13, 2013

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Jon Otano

The topics I write about are very diverse, so are the poetry styles I apply. I started writing poetry in high school in 05. I had written some poetry during class and showed some of my classmates who enjoyed it! I then was chosen to have my poetry in the school newspaper for each month! I done a lot of my work in the library. I met a woman who i showed my work to that worked there, and she said she knew a man that works on the radio! Then i was able to read two poems off the radio. A news reporter who appeared on the station as well decided to do a report on me and I've been writing ever sense. :) If Anybody want to friend request me on Facebook feel free too! Just look up Jon Otano I should be easy to find! :) more…

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