Analysis of Behold The Crack

Jasmin Jay 2004 (Riverside California)



Behold... the crack
oh the shame I feel
the embarrassment that envelopes my mind
all the watchful eyes that sear into my mistake
the judgment and laughter in their gaze
I run
I flee
such as the coward I am
for yet again I've torn my pants
and its laundry day
so to all, I say...
behold...
MY CRACK


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJJKA
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 10111 0010011011 101011101101 010010011 11 11 1101011 11011111 01101 11111 01 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 285
Words 59
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 228
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted by Miss_Jay on March 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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