Analysis of Mind



Should I mind…
If you and I discuss all about my mind?
Anyway… where is the location of my mind?
I remember… right now…
That just the other day… like now…
I was searching for my soul…
And founded  IT  deep within my brain…
Hidden well amidst my best thoughts…
And… total happiness overwhelmed my brain.

It was hard for me to search for my soul…
But… I did not complain.
No pain…
No gain.
Ha! I’ll dig deep within my brain again…
And… perhaps… like with my soul…
My mind might be located somewhere deep…
Within my brain.
What a pain!
Please…, old poet…, do NOT complain…
These things DO take time…, endure the pain.

At least it occurred to me…
That my soul and my mind share my brain.
Perhaps one is in the right lobe…
While the other is… in the left lobe.
Let’s operate on my brain…
No pain…
No gain.
My soul should be big… that’s for sure…
I’m a big man.
Right?
And my mind…  could be on the left.
Or in the center?
Maybe… altogether with my soul?
Intertwined?
Right?
No… maybe… my mind is behind my soul.
Advising IT…
Compelling IT to act always right…
 And never saying: never mind!
My mind and soul reside deep within my brain…
There is nothing to complain…
All is gain!
Again, and again, and again!

I…
Am: Jairo Nemocon.


Scheme aaabbcdxd cdDDecxdddd xdffdDDxxGxxcaGcxgaddde xb
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 111 11010110111 10110010111 101011 11010111 1110111 010110111 10101111 0101000111 1111111111 111101 11 11 1111011101 0011111 11111011 0111 101 11101101 111110101 1110111 111011111 01110011 101010011 110111 11 11 11111111 1011 1 01111101 10010 10010111 001 1 1101110111 0101 01011111 01010101 11010110111 1110101 111 01001001 1 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,267
Words 234
Sentences 24
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 9, 11, 23, 2
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 229
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Submitted by jnemocon on April 28, 2021

Modified on March 29, 2023

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