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losing us

Mishal Maryam

The anxiety of losing you
Made me cling onto the non existant chances of you changing.
Little did I know my feelings were just going to end up rearranging.
You called me a fool when I made the slightest mistake.
Oh the heartache, a fool...?
My dear, Yes I was a fool for losing myself trying to find you.

About this poem

Its about a toxic friendship, where they constantly blamed me for everythinga nd threatened to end the friendship. But i was so madly in love with us that i just couldnt let us go. But in the end i woke up and realized the truth and stopped being afraid.

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Written on July 08, 2021

Submitted by mishikhanay860 on July 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCDA
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 302
Words 59
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
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