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More of you

Doreene Felder 1967 (Phila.)

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More of you Lord
Makes a better me
Living life
How I think it should be
Finding solutions
When I should seek you
Living in illusion
But crying out to you
Seeking answers from the wrong source
Moved me from God
Like a divorce
So here's my call but to you my God
Only you know the way I have tried
Trusting my savior on this long moving ride
Some calls it life
When their trust is in God
Some call it strife
When others are inside

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More of God in my life

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Written on October 09, 2021

Submitted by doreenefelder191 on October 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABCBDEFEGHGHIICHCI
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Characters 421
Words 87
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
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