I thought..
Ryan m. Linn 1993 (West Virginia)
The other day as I laid in bed I saw,
A dot pass the sun as I thought,
Today's the day I got..
I got my nine millimeter.
No more crying I thought as I caught the fresh odor of pinesol
I was reminded My flesh will rot.
Today's the day I thought..
I got my nine millimeter..
Now I got not one more thought.
Not one tear to shed. Not one more drop.
I thought you'd be mine forever but I thought wrong. You'll be fine cause I got..
I got my nine millimeter..
Bury me in black.
About this poem
I dunno how to be myself. I was so defined by the relationship I was in for 13 years I don't know how to go on. Yet, here I am.. going on. And on and on and on.. I hate myself.
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Submitted by ryanl.26247 on January 17, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
| Scheme | xabC xbaC axbC x |
|---|---|
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 486 |
| Words | 115 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 1 |
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