The time I fell in love with the moon.



It all started and ended in the blink of an eye
as the night stars pass through the cycle of life.
I follow through with it. This cycle...
I wait and wait for my only love to show up. The moon.
As she proceeds her way towards me I sit and wait for her.

She's here.

My love has shown up once again when I look at her she's so far, distant, and away from me I want to meet her...
For she always shines upon me with her immaculate beauty her coldness, and yet she's always there for me when I am alone, when I am at my lowest, or even whenever I am at my highest.
I started to realize and question myself "Why does she shine upon me and everyone else what is this relationship that I desire from her." I continue looking while questioning myself. And that's when it hit me she does it for the sake of everybody shining so bright, looking so beautiful that even i'm not able to comprehend this feeling inside me.
As she passes by I say my goodbyes to her once again.
Once she's gone I question my whole experience with her
"How is she so good at this... Helping me..? making me feel this way. What is this feeling??? Is this love?"

About this poem

This is my first ever poem i'm making and actually posting on the internet just for fun. Honestly I am currently in my english class doing this but why not so if it's not the best because of grammar and everything that's completely fine at least I get to type about something, have fun doing, and enjoying to share what I please. This is a shared moment I had with the moon.

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Written on September 20, 2022

Submitted by blacklighter on September 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme XXXXA AXXXAX
Characters 1,134
Words 237
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 5, 6

R. Gary Lee

This is only my moment I have had, and experienced with the moon and that I wish to share with everyone on this website for fun. I also don't wish to share my location or anything personal but I will share my name and date and birth. more…

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