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Destiny

Ramsri U M 2001 (Tamilnadu)

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Once we were holding hands
we were in a magical world
living in the fantasy
wandering round the galaxy
we were in harmony
were busy creating moments
Now,
Loneliness has taken over
Filled your space with emptiness
now I am here crying mess
Living in the memories
Have learnt to fake my smile
weeping all alone in the lap of dark
Thinking of sweet moments in the park
Destiny shattered my fantasy
Thrown me in the reality
                          - Ramsri U M

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Destiny desccribes reality faced by a person after breaking up with the first love

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Written on October 25, 2022

Submitted by umramsri on October 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCCDEFGHIJKKCCL
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 460
Words 84
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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