Drown
Calm and hipnotizing
Calling me to go deep down
Just to make sure i'll seek for something
Not knowing there's no one around
Surrounded by nothing
Either limit or barrier
Just silence and empty
I went down and down
And when I look up to see the sky
I realize i went too far
I tried to scream
But all i heard is nothing
I tried to cry
But all these tears are unseen
I have fallen in depth
Until i can't hear my own voice
Cause its all swollen inside it
I feel unconcious
I forgot that i have to go up
Breath
Inhale
I just forgot to do it
Cause i already
Drown
About this poem
This is about someone who felt so lonely and need help to pulled out from saddest and depressed moment of her life but unfortunately she is alone and no one around. Every aspect of this poem represent someone drowning in water. Drowning mean fall deeper into sadness. Hoping this poem can represent someone sadness out there.
Submitted by Farialalwaini.fa on October 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABAXAXC BAXXAXX XDEDXXXECB |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 559 |
Words | 117 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 7, 10 |
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