LIVING IN DEATH



LIVING IN DEATH

When your time for transition is right
And you close your eyes into the night
Will you die, really die?
Or will your good deeds keep you alive?
Will your name then still remain
A song on the lips of those you once smiled to?
Music in the mouth of someone you once inspired too?

When you close your eyes in this world
And cease to draw breath from your lungs
Will you leave behind a spark that would lead a fellow on the right aright?
Will your words in time past be an adrenaline
That will surge someone forward towards a just goal?
Will you cease to live in death
Or will you live on even after you're gone??

About this poem

It's a poem that encourages people to show love and kindness to people around them.

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Written on October 16, 2022

Submitted by elizabethmasevh23 on October 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BBXXXCC XXBXXAX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 629
Words 132
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 7, 7

Lizzy Shiaondo

Lizzy Shiaondo is from Kwande and currently lives in Makurdi, both in Benue State. She's a single mother of one and the only daughter of her parents. She was born on the 31st of August, 1998 and is currently 24years. She hopes that her literary works would one day be read far and wide. more…

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