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This is you mum!

Riya Dutt 2004 (Uttar Pradesh, Meerut)

Hello mother, I want to confess,
you are my heaven God gave me to bless!

You complete me and make me perfect, you take all the pain and heal all defect!

Mother you are like my only hope,
you make my confidence to rise and negative things drop!

In the ocean of darkness and depression, this is what you mean to me and it's my true confession!

Please stay with me even after the end,
I am strong with you but without you I only pretend!

You scold me, slaps me and sometimes beat me hard,
but I know, thats also a blessing you give me as my Gaurd!

You wake whole night whenever I am ill,
Mother you are the angel i got and every healing pill!

I know I act rude, sometimes behave so strange,
I'm sorry for what I say because I forgot words to arrange!

Hey mother, mummy, maa, mom whatever I call,
You are the album that keeps my memories to recall!

Please never leave my hand because I fear to be left alone,
I want you to scold me, love me, and remember I am your clone!

About this poem

This poetry/poem is dedicated to a mother. It tells about what a teenagers think about their mother.

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Submitted by riyadutt706 on October 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA B XX X CC XB DD EE FF GG
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 976
Words 219
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
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Riya Dutt

I'm Riya Dutt, a teenage girl. I have completed my academics in 2022 and now I am preparing to be a doctor. I love to write when I feel lonely. more…

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