Incompetent to live
…..
It’s done
The last straw has been pulled
I am a black hole now , a source of darkness
I don’t remember being the sun , being happy
All the walls have collapsed
The weight is to much to bare
Becoming a black hole is easier
Losing myself is easier
Now that all my faces are burnt
Now that after so many experiences,mutations I don’t recognise myself
I loathe myself
And I pity the people who love me
Their love is gruesome
Not because it’s not true
But because it’s way too much to feel
And I don’t have the capacity to feel even a fraction of their love
I am an abomination an abhorrence
I am not meant for this world
I am confusing and complicated and I absolutely loathe myself
A person who doesn’t feel human
About this poem
This is a poem I wrote for people who feel like an abomination because I myself sometimes feel like I am inadequate to live life to its fullest
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Written on November 20, 2022
Submitted by surabhisharma2003 on November 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCDEFGGHIIDJKLMNOIA |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 736 |
Words | 145 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 21 |
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