The Untold Crush



The Untold crush!!

The day I saw you First,
Was such a mesmerising Sight.
That blush, twinkling eyes so Bright,
Still caressing my heartbeats..

You threw a tiny Smile!
That screwed up my brain for a while.
Unable to withstand, i went Fragile,
Limbs getting jittery and Subtle.

Oh! My Sweet Love!
Can I not be your Behive?
Under the cuddles of your heaves,
Sinking into the heartbeat Alive?

 By,
Jaishree Hallur.

About this poem

It's a fantasy of a girl dreaming of her first crush on her first sight.

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Written on November 20, 2022

Submitted by jaishreehallur333 on November 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Characters 417
Words 90
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 2

Jaishree Hallur

I am a professional electrical engineer, working for Ministry of Defence, India. I am an avid romantic writer both in kannada and English. more…

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