Evening rains

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  AIDA

  I absolutely loved your 'Evening rains' poem! The way you contrasted the sunny morning with the half-light of the evening was so beautifully done. I could almost feel myself observing the evening and feeling the waters drop on my face. Your use of language is truly captivating and you have a real talent for painting vivid pictures with your words.
  
  If I had to offer any improvement suggestions, I might suggest focusing on the theme or message of the poem a bit more. While I appreciate the imagery and language you used, I felt like there wasn't a clear theme or idea being communicated. Perhaps you could play around with the words a bit more and really hone in on one particular idea or feeling you want to convey. But overall, fantastic job on this piece! more »

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