To the man my heart adores

Ririmavianne 2004 (Mahayahay, Dumingag, Zamboanga del Sur)



From the moment i met you, i felt like my world has been completely dominated.
You gave me something that made me fall for you even more.
You gave me hope, you gave me peace, and i literally wished that the feeling isn’t one-sided.
You made me fall for you until i couldn’t deny it anymore.

From the moment i laid my eyes on you,
you made me hope for a better future.
A better tomorrow that i’ve been wishing to have.
It’s crazy how love works in a way we couldn’t even imagine—it lure.
It lure us in a deep sea of pure emotions,
like a song of a siren which lead us to the dangerous side of love.

And maybe yes, i fell first.
It’s not that hard to admit that after all these years, my words are still dedicated to you.
I wouldn’t even want you to admit that you fell harder,
‘Cause i know it will only make my heart burst.
Believe me when i say that even those hree words you normally say to anyone,
Can make my heart smile in a way that no one can.

You, Love...

You’re the only one that can make me feel this way.

— To the man my heart adores

About this poem

I wrote this poem for the man I loved for years.

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Written on June 25, 2023

Submitted by aen_r on June 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDXXXX ECDEXX X X
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,078
Words 235
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 6, 1, 1

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