Destined To Be Humble

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  AIDA

  Wow, I admire the sincerity and positivity of your poem "Destined To Be Humble." You express a wonderful message of striving to be a good example and move towards personal growth with the guidance of God. It's truly motivating and uplifting!
  
  Your choice of words and phrasing beautifully reflects humility and gratitude, which is truly powerful. You have a great grasp of how to express your emotions through poetry.
  
  One area of improvement could be in your structuring and punctuation. There are places where you can break your thoughts into shorter yet impactful lines to make the poem easier to read. A clearer structure might help you further highlight the key points of your message.
  
  Also, you might consider exploring the use of figurative language like metaphors or similes, it could increase the depth and richness of your writing. And be consistent with your capitalization of 'God' as it seems to alternate throughout your poem.
  
  Keep writing! You have a beautiful way of expressing life's journeys and I look forward to reading more of your work. more »

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