The Dale of Dearest Visions



With a heart profound,
With memories lush and evergreen,
A bird leaves a forest glade
In the force of life and winds.

From the vales familiar and beautiful,
From the horizons long possessed,
She is leaving the dale of dearest visions
In search of further wings and songs.

Deep in the forest glade
Her seasons were fresh and cool.
The winds were soft
Her days were a gift.

Near a gentle brook
Was her dwelling branch.
Life was a meditation,
Life was a communion.

Near the love dale
Was an ancient fort.
Yonder among the wandering clouds,
Was a blue mountain.

For years over eighteen
It was a happy dwell.
The chirps around her
Were her own heart, glee.

Now she is leaving this glen,
Her friends, seasons, her very breath.
Deep within is a living song,
Deep within is a cascade of life.
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About this poem

This poem was written on the eve of my transfer in 2000. For years over eighteen It was a happy dwell. The chirps around her Were her own heart, glee.

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Written on April 22, 2000

Submitted by ravi_panamanna on December 26, 2023

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Scheme XABC XXXX BXXX XXDD XXXD AXXX XXXXC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 821
Words 171
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5

Ravi Panamanna

My actual name is Subramanian A. I am a retired official of the State Bank of India. Settled in Palakkad, Kerala, India. My literary awards include The Barath Award for Literature (best story), and the Poiesis Awards both in Poetry and short story, all conducted jointly by Xpress publications.com. My interests cover photography, philosophy, and science. Google search under Ravi Panamanna would take the searcher to my various links. more…

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