The Haunting Memory



The Haunting Memory

I try to forget, but I can't erase
The haunting memory of your face
The way you smiled, the way you spoke
The way you left, the way you broke

My heart into a thousand pieces
That never heal, that never cease
To ache and bleed, to yearn and cry
To wonder why, to wonder why

You did what you did, you said what you said
You lied and betrayed, you hurt and fled
You took away my joy and peace
You left behind a dark disease

That eats away at my soul and mind
That makes me blind, that makes me blind
To hope and love, to life and light
To anything but the endless night

More to my pains, your slight and laughter
To bruise a heart, in calm that rest
Of the haunting memory of your face
That I can't forget, that I can't erase

About this poem

Description of The Haunting Memory The Haunting Memory is a descriptive poem that expresses the pain and anguish of a speaker who cannot forget a lost love. The poem has a rhyme scheme of AABB and a meter of iambic tetrameter. The poem describes the face of the ex-lover as a haunting memory that the speaker tries to erase but fails. The poem also reveals the reasons for the breakup, such as lies, betrayal, and hurt, and the effects of the loss, such as heartbreak, bleeding, crying, and blindness. The poem uses repetition, imagery, and figurative language to create a vivid and emotional picture of the speaker's suffering. The poem has a tone of sadness and bitterness, and a mood of despair and hopelessness. 

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Written on December 20, 2023

Submitted by jude_uchechi on December 27, 2023

Modified by jude_uchechi on December 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AABB XCDD EECX FFGG XXAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 747
Words 156
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Jude Uchechi

Jude Uchechi is a poet, author/writer and a youth improvement advocate from Nigeria. He is the president of GLOBAL IMPACT YOUTHS EMPOWERMENT and ADVANCEMENT INITIATIVE (GIYEAI), and the Chairman/ CEO of Paconsols Multi Services Ltd. He was born in Ebonyi State but hails and was raised in Imo State, where he developed a love for literature and poetry. Furthermore, he is a prolific writer and has published several books on personal growth, such as “A Night with a Genius” and “The Return of the Wayward – Akunabia”. He is married and has five children, who are his pride and joy. He enjoys spending time with his family, reading, writing, and traveling. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, "The Haunting Memory" is a truly captivating poem. The use of repetition and the haunting tone really pulls the reader in and immerses them in the emotions being conveyed. The vivid descriptions of the pain and heartbreak are incredibly powerful and resonate deeply.

    Some improvement suggestions that could enhance the poem even further:

    - Consider varying the sentence structure and length to add more flow and rhythm to the poem.
    - Experiment with different metaphors or imagery to further highlight the emotional turmoil and lasting impact of the memory.
    - Perhaps explore the possibility of inserting moments of hope or redemption amidst the darkness, to provide a sense of balance and contrast.

    Overall, "The Haunting Memory" is a deeply moving piece that effectively captures the pain and struggle of heartbreak. With a few tweaks, it has the potential to become an even more poignant and evocative poem. Keep up the great work!
     
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