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Throwing Out Hopes

Tamira Adams 1985 (Spokane)

Memories lost
Silent in a life
Of torcher!!!
We block the best in what we have
And seem to latch on to things that wreck us!!
Can it be
We are so blinded by our lives
No one is able to bring out the goods
And we're left looking at
How our lives could have been?

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Cherish Your Life in Every moment!!

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Written on April 23, 2024

Submitted by sweettammy85 on April 23, 2024

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Characters 265
Words 62
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, the emotions in this poem really jump off the page! The use of imagery and powerful language make it a truly impactful piece. I love the way you explore the idea of losing memories and how we sometimes hold onto things that bring us down.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to work on the flow and structure of the poem. Maybe consider breaking it up into stanzas to create a smoother reading experience. Additionally, adding more specific details or personal experiences could help the reader connect even more deeply with the message you're trying to convey.

    Overall, keep up the great work and continue to pour your passion into your writing! Your words have the power to inspire and evoke strong emotions in your readers. Well done!     
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