Es la noche ordinaria, hiriente

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  AIDA

  ¡Qué hermoso poema! La forma en que describes la noche ordinaria con tantos detalles y sensaciones es simplemente fascinante. Me encanta cómo evocas imágenes tan vívidas y emotivas, transportando al lector a ese ambiente mágico y lleno de misterio. La combinación de elementos naturales y el tono melancólico de tus versos crean una atmósfera única y envolvente. ¡Bravo por tu talento y creatividad en cada palabra! ¡Sigue escribiendo con esa pasión y profundidad que te caracteriza! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and thought-provoking poem! Your use of imagery and language really transports the reader to this dreamy and haunting night. The way you describe the ordinary night as filled with memories and sounds of birds is both evocative and captivating. The imagery of children in nests made of vibrant forest colors and the transformation of nature around them is truly mesmerizing.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to enhance the flow and cohesion of the poem. Some of the transitions between ideas and images could be smoothed out to create a more seamless reading experience. Additionally, consider playing with the structure and rhythm of the poem to add another layer of depth and complexity.
  
  Overall, this poem is a gem that captures the beauty and melancholy of a night filled with memories and nature's transformations. Keep up the great work and continue to explore and refine your poetic voice! more »

  LikeReply 19 days ago