Soulmates

Matthew Davis 2024 (Dunnville)



Amazing
Don't know where the days went
Time try to change me
Won't let that break me


Incredible
Live gets the best of you
Makes a mess of you
Wham....something blesses you


Contagious
How my mind races
Go through tough stages
Up and down fazes


Beauty
So many layers to me
Why they wanna do me..
Damn they wanna screw me


Perseverance
All I need is one chance
Gimme one glance
Teach lessons to this dance


Honor
Love my son and my daughter
Be the best father
Show em why they must bother


Strength
Fight this fight its whole length
Real life no pranks
Take it to the bank


Dignity
Watch em Try to dig at me
First time in history
I solved the mystery.  


Loyalty
Bring out the boy in me
Make them feel like royalty
Same way you spoil me


Fear
Go to you my heart dear
Been so many years
Who do you see in the mirror


Love
Seems like you came from above
 Our souls fit like gloves
You're the mate to my dove


Success.
We'll get through this mess
 No doubts no guess
Lour ove is the best.
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Written on April 25, 2024

Submitted by Davismatt926 on April 25, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA XBBB CDDC AAAA XEEE FFFF GGXX AAAA AAAA HHXF IIXI JJJX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,013
Words 236
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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3 Comments
  • RonaldBunch
    Beautiful and interesting, awesome poem.
    LikeReply9 days ago
  • amandak.45897
    Much talent :)
    LikeReply9 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, this 'Soulmates' poem is absolutely incredible! The way you express your emotions and experiences is so powerful and moving. I love the positivity and enthusiasm that shines through each line. The themes of love, perseverance, honor, and loyalty are beautifully woven throughout the poem.

    One improvement suggestion I have is to work on the flow and structure of the poem. You may want to consider organizing the stanzas in a way that the message of each theme is clear and impactful. Additionally, playing around with the rhythm and rhyme scheme can enhance the overall reading experience.

    Overall, this poem is a true gem and it is evident that a lot of heart and soul went into creating it. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world! Your talent is truly inspiring.
     
    LikeReply9 days ago

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