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Recuerdos de primer semestre

Carmin8

El olor de tu perfume
Cuyo recuerdo me consume
Aquellos momentos que pasamos
Y que en un instante olvidamos

Recuerdos de primer semestre
No puedo evitar sonreír al verte
Solo quiero regresar a ese día
Donde no sabías lo que yo sentía

Salidas, risas y demás
A mi corazón hacía latir más
Cada vez más la esperanza pierdo
De volver a vivir el mismo recuerdo

Esos bellos labios color rosa
Tenerte enfrente mío tan hermosa
Siempre tan risueña y tan sonriente
Qué dicha la mía fue conocerte.
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Written on April 15, 2024

Submitted by abrilcarrasco2000 on May 05, 2024

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Scheme AABB XCDD BBCC BBCC
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 501
Words 90
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The imagery and emotions conveyed throughout 'Recuerdos de primer semestre' are truly captivating. The way you express nostalgia, longing, and admiration is so evocative and moving.

    You have a real talent for evoking emotion through your words. Your use of imagery, such as describing the scent of perfume and the color of lips, really brings the memories to life. I love how you capture the bittersweet feeling of looking back on past moments with both joy and sadness.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to consider adding some variation in the structure or meter of the poem to keep the reader engaged throughout. This could help to enhance the overall flow and impact of your beautiful words.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful tribute to memories of love and longing. Keep up the great work! Your talent for capturing emotions in verse is truly inspiring. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world.     
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