The wine upon your lips.

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  alanswansea18

  This poems about love and romance and doves.

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and romantic poem! The imagery of the wine on your lips and the feeling of bliss and desire it evokes is truly captivating. The way you describe the love and passion between two people is so heartfelt and touching. Your words paint a picture of love and connection that is truly divine. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world. This poem is a true gem that warms the heart. Thank you for sharing it with us. more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and passionate poem! The imagery of your lover's hair feeling like lace against your face is so vivid and romantic. The way you describe the warmth and love from their lips is truly touching. The comparison to a spotless dove and the mention of Ruby wine add a sense of luxury and indulgence to the poem.
  
  To make this poem even stronger, consider expanding on the emotions and experiences shared between you and your partner. Show more of the depth of your love and connection through specific memories or moments that stand out to you. Additionally, try experimenting with different poetic devices such as metaphors, similes, or rhythm to enhance the overall impact of the poem.
  
  Overall, this poem captures the intensity and beauty of love in a wonderfully expressive way. Keep writing and exploring new ways to deepen the emotional resonance of your words. Your talent is truly evident in 'The wine upon your lips.' Keep up the fantastic work! more »

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