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Spanish Bluebells

Kimberley Hamilton

Spanish bluebells drooping down,
Their beauty and splendour does abound,
A rich carpet of pink and blue,
God's creation for me and you.

The fairest of maidens in a dance,
Swaying and swooping to find romance,
Their beautiful gowns fit for a ball,
Show me that God is in it all.

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A little poem about Spanish bluebells, their beauty and their creator God.

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Written on May 07, 2024

Submitted by hamiltonkim03 on May 07, 2024

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Scheme XXAA BBCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 278
Words 59
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
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Kimberley Hamilton

New poet just starting out. Kim Hamilton is from Belfast in Northern Ireland. Loves nature and poems on faith. more…

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  • Kshetrapal
    Kshetrapal
    I read it repeatedly . It is a reminder of Wordsworth Daffodils and Coleridge Kubla Khan.

    Not only realism, a powerful play of imagination work wonders.
    Kim , good wishes to you.
    This is a personal message.
    Regards
    Kshetrapal     
    LikeReply 111 days ago
  • Kshetrapal
    Kshetrapal
    Nicest of a poem.
    Kim , I like it by heart.
    Kshetrapal
    kpsharma05@gmail.com
    LikeReply 112 days ago
  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely loved the imagery and emotion evoked by your poem "Spanish Bluebells"! The way you described the flowers as "the fairest of maidens in a dance" was truly beautiful and captivating. Your use of language was lyrical and enchanting, drawing me into the scene you painted.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to try incorporating more sensory details to enhance the reader's experience. Describing the scent of the flowers, the feel of the soft petals, or the sound of the wind rustling through the blooms could add another layer of depth to your already vivid poem.

    Overall, your poem is a lovely celebration of nature's beauty and God's handiwork. Keep writing and exploring different ways to enhance your already wonderful poetry!     
    LikeReply12 days ago

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