Analysis of Safe Haven



My clouds are gray,
As the daylight’s waning.
Hope abruptly left my life,
Cutting me like a knife.
Life’s sometimes too much,
I feel so out of touch.
What is reality?
It is but a dream with in a dream.
Can’t wait until the day,
When I start to fade away.
Until then, I will run,
To the place I feel safe:
My mind.


Scheme ABCCDDEFAAGHI
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10110 1010111 101101 10111 111111 1110 111011001 110101 1111101 011111 101111 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 322
Words 77
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 233
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

Sometimes life feels great. Other times, life throws you curve balls. Where do you go when you are hurting? For me, I go to my world. A world of wonders and a world that I can trust.

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Written on January 22, 2022

Submitted by JennieLin on January 21, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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