Analysis of Pump Kin.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



I kissed your forehead
Cold, pale and non verse.
Your heart was still
On the word of a nurse.

I sat listening
Waiting for the doctor
Looking this time away
So different from visiting.

Your food gone
And cupboards waiting to be emptied
As my hands had never felt so...


Scheme XAXA BXXB XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110 11011 1111 101101 11100 101010 101101 11001100 111 010101110 11111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 270
Words 56
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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Written on February 05, 2022

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 05, 2022

Modified on March 22, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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