Analysis of The Pause

Jeffrey Hopkins 1959 (Bay Shore, NY)



By Jeff Hopkins

I take a pause to ponder life.
She's moving on much faster.
The way things are, I'm satisfied,
Just wish I could outlast her.

I've had a mixed bag of wondrous things,
A few I could not even dream of.
The places I've been, the things I have seen,
Like pallets of thoughts, dreams are made of.

But throughout all the while,
I am able to smile,
Throughout good times
and times that are bad.

It's a gift I was given,
As my life goes on living.
I keep bad from turning to sad.


Scheme X XAXA XBXB CCXD XXD
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 11011101 1101110 0111110 111110 110111101 011111011 0101101111 110111111 101101 111011 0111 01111 1011110 1111110 11111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 502
Words 117
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

This is a short poem about some of my life and my attitude.

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Written on May 30, 2019

Submitted by luckejeff on March 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jeffrey Hopkins

Jeffrey is a respected and well-liked writer. He's a natural entrepreneur and began his career by starting a successful television production company, JHD Productions Ltd., in 1980, of which he is the "JH". His responsibilities included producing, writing, scripting, and editing many productions. more…

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