Analysis of The morning friend



I rise in the morning to my stomach rumbling
I rush to my dear toilet now suddenly running
Now I’m in the restroom fighting the demon
Just in a few seconds I am now a freeman
I’m now ready to pull down the lever
But I feel the loss I shall remember forever
As my fingers push I watch it pass away
But you will remain in my heart everyday


Scheme AABBCCDD
Poetic Form
Metre 1100101110100 1111110110010 1100110010 100110111010 1110111010 1110111010010 11101111101 11101011101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 342
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 266
Words per stanza (avg) 70

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An elegy poem about my morning

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Written on April 18, 2022

Submitted by jpark on May 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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