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The morning friend

jpark

Elegy
I rise in the morning to my stomach rumbling
I rush to my dear toilet now suddenly running
Now I’m in the restroom fighting the demon
Just in a few seconds I am now a freeman
I’m now ready to pull down the lever
But I feel the loss I shall remember forever
As my fingers push I watch it pass away
But you will remain in my heart everyday

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An elegy poem about my morning

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Written on April 18, 2022

Submitted by jpark on May 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 342
Words 71
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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